"I lost my map!" she said, disoriented.
Love them! "You're hallucinating again," John said, acidly.
Love this, Frank!
"I'll admit, I snorted at a few of these," she said sloppily.
“‘I Want Candy’ is my favorite Halloween song,” she smiled sweetly.
“Thanks,” I said, gratefully.
These are great! A much needed moment of humor.
Thank you, Barb!! :) I love these!
Here are a few of my coinage (years ago):
"I guess I'll serve that scallopini again tonight," he revealed.
"Look how good I can throw my knife," he mumbled to Peg.
Love the use of revealed especially!
These are great, David!
“Don’t use braids anymore!” she brayed!
Close…
"Thank you," she said graciously.
"The off-key trumpets were making my ears bleed," he said sharply.
Yes! And the dialogue tag could also be “…he said, trying to sound sanguine.”
So great. Thank you.
Thank you, Rachel - it's hard to stop coming up with them once you start!
Love them! "You're hallucinating again," John said, acidly.
Love this, Frank!
"I'll admit, I snorted at a few of these," she said sloppily.
“‘I Want Candy’ is my favorite Halloween song,” she smiled sweetly.
“Thanks,” I said, gratefully.
These are great! A much needed moment of humor.
Thank you, Barb!! :) I love these!
Here are a few of my coinage (years ago):
"I guess I'll serve that scallopini again tonight," he revealed.
"Look how good I can throw my knife," he mumbled to Peg.
Love the use of revealed especially!
These are great, David!
“Don’t use braids anymore!” she brayed!
Close…
"Thank you," she said graciously.
"The off-key trumpets were making my ears bleed," he said sharply.
Yes! And the dialogue tag could also be “…he said, trying to sound sanguine.”
So great. Thank you.
Thank you, Rachel - it's hard to stop coming up with them once you start!